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Aug 28, 2022Liked by David Yaffe

In my creative writing classes (decades ago now), we read her "Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been" as a model. As I'm sure you know, the story is dedicated to Bob Dylan.

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Eitzel is one of the most underrated writers of our generation. Not just songwriter, but "writer" period.

In the early 90s, I was just out of HS and naive (or cocky?) enough to think I knew my way around the English language and could get it to bend to my will.

Then I heard "Wish The World Away,' and learned that I didn't know anything.

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Aug 28, 2022Liked by David Yaffe

It's a very different kind of bitterness, though, than that of Crane's "naked, bestial" creature in the desert eating his heart out. There's the bitterness that's self-destructive, and then there's the bitterness to savor and appreciate....

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I think it’s both. Stephen Crane and Joyce Carol Oates (who used it for a title) both went to Syracuse. I was in charge of a lecture series named for the former and met the latter.

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Aug 28, 2022Liked by David Yaffe

Some deep and torturous waters here. Thank goodness some of us eventually learn how to float and swim.

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Aug 28, 2022Liked by David Yaffe

There are many answers.....

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Aug 28, 2022Liked by David Yaffe

"My Papa's Waltz" is one of my favorite poems. We recite it, dance it, act it multiple times every year.

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I asked her why. She said, it’s about the final moments of this young woman’s life. It’s all over now, baby blue.

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